This blog is all about our supplementary novel, Matched, by Ally Condie. When you read this blog, you will delve upon a society where the society officials choose who you love, where you work, what you eat, and when you will die. So what are you going to choose... passion or perfection?
This is really difficult to read unless you blow it up a little more. Overall, I like what you did with it, but you are falling short in your narrative POV and tense in some areas. Watch out for comma errors. Good job.
This is really difficult to read unless you blow it up a little more. Overall, I like what you did with it, but you are falling short in your narrative POV and tense in some areas. Watch out for comma errors. Good job.
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